Hey Greywar, just read the whole thing, comments and all. Good stuff, and I can't wait to see what happens next. The only problem I see is that I was there, and my fragile ego is feeling wounded that so far I've only gotten a mention as the guy with the camera. It seemed to me at the time that the whole thing was revolving around me and my life. Think you could throw that in there?
Greetings to old friends I haven't seen in a while; Estrogen Lass, Pseudosoldier, (you've always been the real thing, as far as I'm concerned) Sangus, and all the other players in the unfolding drama. I'll keep watching this space. Later!