Reply #1 from Sins Forums Top

fantastic camera work, some of the best ive seen from Sins, however the jumping between soundtracks with each scene change was horrible and should have been easily overcome, you lost major points for that

and the crappy subtitles you put at the bottom just ruined it... "But there is this empire... that did these things with these ships and then like, omgosh i dont know, like, this person just did that thing and it was way cool... and its time to bring in the big guns..." and thats it... seriously... really shit

so, 11/10 for camera work and what you recorded (though some combat between your empire and theres could have gone a long way)

2/10 for music

-15/10 for the crappy subtitles

nonetheless, good work and keep trying

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Reply #2 from Sins Forums Top

Thanks for your honesty. Most people would say it sucks, and not give any reasons why.

I was hoping to get away with the music. I recorded the game music, and tried to use that. So unfortunately in order to change the music, I would have to record the whole thing over. I will turn the music off next time. And use something else.

And believe it or not, the subtitles was the hardest thing to do. I wanted to try and tell a story. But as I started writing, I realized something. I can't tell a story very well. That's why at the end I said, "maybe" coming soon. Unless I find a co writer, I probably won't do it.

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Reply #3 from Sins Forums Top

I agree with Rez, Music change wasnt smooth enough if your gonna change music like that.

 

Your camera shots were good.

 

Subtitles...well Im torn. They are neat for someone who not play SINS and such. They are a bit distracting. Yet I also know your trying to tell a story. I suggest its easier to do that if you do some voiceovers. Kinda like the opening movie to SINS.

 

I also suggest you download Bailknight's Graphic Mod. Makes moives sooo much cooler!

Reply #4 from Sins Forums Top

I also suggest you download Bailknight's Graphic Mod. Makes moives sooo much cooler!

seconded

Reply #5 from Sins Forums Top

Will have to look into that mod.

Thanks

Reply #6 from Stardock Forums Top

anything more planned?

Reply #7 from Sins Forums Top

Video removed!!

0/10

Amazing what can happened in an hour after the last person watch it

Reply #8 from Sins Forums Top

Sorry guys I removed it. I really didn't like it that much. I am planing on doing something. Will let you know when I do.