The ' I made a webcomic and I want people's feedback' thread

My webcomic, let me show it to you... let me show it to you, my webcomic.

from Demigod Forums

Basically, could I be so bold as to post my first webcomic here, and ask for feedback?

 

 

cheers

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Reply #2 from Demigod Forums Top

Not everyone will like it. I just want a general opinion. Keep them coming.

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Reply #3 from Sins Forums Top

A little funny, slightly less offensive...

Nice job for your first, but you crack down on a lot of things, and there seems to be no system of Karma in your comic-world....<_<

 

Koda0 (^)

Reply #4 from Demigod Forums Top

Quoting koda0, reply 3
A little funny, slightly less offensive...

Nice job for your first, but you crack down on a lot of things, and there seems to be no system of Karma in your comic-world....

 

Koda0 (^)

 

Offensive in what respect?

Reply #5 from Elemental Forums Top

Quoting DrFappo, reply 4
Offensive in what respect?
To all my senses. And it didn't even expose all seven of them.

Reply #6 from Sins Forums Top

Well, to Christians, and to my fellow Emo's out there.

(Okay, I'm a Vamp., but whatevs, it still hurtsX( )

 

Koda0 (^)

Reply #7 from GalCiv2 Forums Top

I don't find anything especially OFFENSIVE about it, so much as it is just extrordinatily WIERD. And not that funny. I suppose if you were actively LOOKING for something to take offense about, you could say that it was racist, but even that's a long shot.

Reply #8 from Demigod Forums Top

Quoting Scoutdog, reply 7
I don't find anything especially OFFENSIVE about it, so much as it is just extrordinatily WIERD. And not that funny. I suppose if you were actively LOOKING for something to take offense about, you could say that it was racist, but even that's a long shot.

If anything that has black people in it qualifies as racist, then you might as well deem the Bill Cosby show or anything that has black people in it racist in and on itself.

Infact, in the webcomic Bill Cosby is depicted as a lot smarter than the ugly white woman, so I am more open to people arguing that my webcomic is slightly racist against white people.

Reply #9 from GalCiv2 Forums Top

in the webcomic Bill Cosby is depicted as a lot smarter than the ugly white woman

That's a woman?

Reply #10 from Sins Forums Top

See, the thing is, we don't KNOW anything about your comic. And unlike Robot Chicken, it's not random enough, and I'm pretty sure none of us can relate to calling God emo, or flicking him/her off.

 

Koda0 (^)

Reply #11 from Sins Forums Top

This is more like a 'put a bag over my head and beat me senseless' thread.  ;P

Reply #12 from Elemental Forums Top

If anything that has black people in it qualifies as racist, then you might as well deem the Bill Cosby show or anything that has black people in it racist in and on itself.

My point exactly.

Reply #13 from Stardock Forums Top

it pretty much sucks.  sorry.

Reply #14 from Sins Forums Top

Well,come on guys, cut him some slack, first try on the internet, and to boost his confidence he tries a place where he thinks people won't be as harsh, and yet here 90% of you are, shooting him down before he's even taken off.  Me, personally, I have to congratulate him for having the stones to put it on the Internet.  For a first try, I will admit I've seen better, but try to relate to real-life more next time, kay?;P

 

Koda0 (^)

Reply #15 from Demigod Forums Top

 

Here's the second one. I hope you find it better.

Reply #16 from Sins Forums Top

Better... and funnier... still a little sketchy w/ the art, but I don't think that you can change that.

 

Koda0 (^)