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Counterstrike!

Counterstrike!

Yes, another unconventional AAR...

So, I finally decided to write a story, set after the events of DA (well, I haven't finished the DA campaign yet, so maybe something won't be correct) First of all, I can assure you that I am NOT trying to kill the English language. I hope you will pardon me for the various grammatical errors/horrors: English isn't my native speech. Second, I don't know how frequently I'll manage to post the new parts. Maybe once or twice a week (I hope so). If you have any suggestions (and corrections) don’t hesitate to tell me them. Now, good reading!

"I remember stories of our once great civilization, of cities which spires once reached the sun, of children who once saw, in the stars, the destiny of our race. Now, I doubt that our ancestors could ever think how awful our future would be. But I’m sure that they would never give up their fight for their dreams, for their future, for their freedom. And we’ll do the same. Because this is the Alliance. The Alliance is freedom. And if there’s something that the Drengin never have, or will understood is this. The Drengin will eventually be defeated due to their inability to understand this. This will happen. Maybe not today. Maybe not tomorrow. But I can assure you that this will finally happen."
Alan Bradley, president of the Terran Alliance, 16 April 2232

Aaron Stamford, former ambassador of the Terran Alliance (or of what remained of it), waited nervously to be announced in the Imperial Hall. He was a 58 years old terran from the North American Federation, tall and thin, with dark blue eyes and white hair. Finally, an insectoid alien came to him. He recognized Varyag, the Emperor personal factotum. "Ambassador, would you follow me?" he asked. "Of course" he replied. "I’m really happy to see again His Excellency". No, that wasn’t true. What he really would like to do was to turn back and run out of the palace, out of the city, and come back on Earth, to live his last years of life in peace in that nice house near lake Michigan, as he deserved for twenty-two years of service. Unfortunately, he knew that he couldn’t do that. First, this would have cancelled the good relations between the Alliance and the Empire. Second, between him and Earth there were dozens of Drengin fleets that really wanted to kill him. And third, Earth was protected behind a planetary-wide shield where nothing could enter or exit, and he knew Great Admiral Alighieri, the Terran Navy supreme commander, well enough to be sure that the shield wouldn’t be deactivated only to allow him to enter. It was more probably that his shuttle would have been destroyed by the ground SSM ( Surface to Space Missiles) defences, just to be sure that a Drengin commando wasn’t trying to infiltrate on Earth on a terran ship. So, he had to do that meeting.
He followed Varyag in a long corridor until they reached an huge silver door, at least fifteen meters high, guarded by two Elite Imperial Guards. They opened the door as soon as they saw Varyag, and Aaron entered in the heart of the Empire, the Imperial Room.

Aaron and Varyag bowed in front of an high throne, situated over a series of crystal steps, where Avatar, the leader of the Shivan Star Empire, was sitting.
"Here, Great Avatar, is Aaron Stamford, ambassador of the Terran Alliance" Varyag said. Avatar moved his five eyes on the terran, and Aaron felt a shiver running on his back. He was always scared from the alien leader glance. It was… strange. He could never say what the leader was thinking.
" I am glad to see you again, ambassador. What would you like to talk about on this glorious day?" Sigh. Why me? Aaron thought. Couldn’t Alan Bradley complain with Avatar directly? No! He needs to send an ambassador in the Imperial Palace to say: "we are disappointed". But this is my job. So, let’s do it. "I am sorry, Avatar, but my leaders have some… complaints for you" Avatar suddenly looked much more interested. "They want to inform you that they consider…" he stopped for a moment, before continuing. He couldn’t believe what he was doing. He was criticizing the strongest Earth ally. He must be mad. But he was following his orders.
"Go on, Aaron Stamford". Well, they pay me for this he thought. "…they consider barbaric the Shivan attack on the Drengin planet of Kaala". Oh God, I did it. I hope he wouldn’t be too angry for this. But Avatar wasn’t angry. He looked… curious? "Well… can I ask you why? He said. Aaron coughed. Really he doesn’t understand it? "This is simple, Avatar. Your cruisers have launched a 36-hours straight planetary bombardment with neutrino bombs, that has killed at least 5 billion troops and 56 million civilians. On Earth, we call it a genocide. You say you are an our ally, but how we can trust you if you do the same things that a Korath would do?" Or, more important, how can we be sure that once the Drengin will be defeated, you won’t do the same thing with us?
Avatar waited few minutes before responding. "It seems you are sorry for the Drengins, terran. Have you forgot that they have almost destroyed your civilization, together with the Drath and the Korx?" "This is true, Excellency. But your actions remain. Don’t you think that a planetary invasion with…""No" Avatar interrupted him "You humans believe into mercy, in compassion, in understanding of the enemy feeling. We don’t believe into these things. We believe into efficiency. In my opinion, it is better that billions of Drengin die than expose at that risk a single Shivan soldier. Neutrino bombs were the most effective way to ensure this. And this war is too important. We have to use all the weapons at our disposal. Even the Altarians are doing so. You humans should do this, too". Aaron sighed. Now he fully understood why, despite all their good intentions, the Shivans were considered an ethically evil civilization. "However, ambassador, this isn’t too much important. Instead, we would like to discuss with you about the price of that supply of Terran micro repair bots…"
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As the ex-Imperial fleet neared Drengi, Sakrine thought about what he was doing. Irrationality? he asked himself for the thousandth time. But after a moment of loss, his crew has obeyed his orders. Maybe they think that this is the right thing? He wasn’t still sure that an insurrection was the best way to save his race. The only thing he was sure was that Kona had to be got rid of. But the fact remained that he was going to kill his brothers and sons to ‘protect his homeland’. Surely, Kona was going to fight him with the loyal ships that were still protecting Drengi. This would have weakened the Empire even more… He looked the holoscreen. Only a week before it was all red, with occasional spots of blue, yellow, grey or purple. Now, more than half of it was lost. The red lines were retreating. Slowly, but they were undoubtedly retreating. The glorious day of the Empire were finished. As the Terrans said before landing on Kazi’th two hours before, their descent into the dark abyss of defeat had begun. The Armada was too fragmented to react effectively at this, and with his rebellion, there was little hope to form a compact front against the invaders. Invaders… It’s funny how fate can turn in a war. They have won a single battle in a year… and that battle has decided the destiny of an entire race. Funny… not exactly the right word. He sipped his Her’k glass. But there will be a way to defeat Kona without risking billions of lives, or not?
“Overlord, a fleet of warships has just left Drengi. The Emperor’s personal dreadnaught, the Drag'narth, is among them. Contact in nine timeunits and an half.”
“Open a channel.”
“What?”
“It seems that ‘what’ has became your favourite word lately, controller. Open a channel.”
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“They’re hailing us, my Emperor. Should we respond?”
“Yes. Despite they’re only a handful of traitor worms, they’re still Drengin.”
Sakrine’s voice came from the intercom, and started speaking without the usual preambles.
“Lord Kona, I want to inform you that…”
“That what, you dirty traitor! You have betrayed the faith that We put on you! You have…”
“…that I think that enough Drengin blood has been poured. There’s no need for another fratricide battle. So, I’ve decided…”
“You what?! I AM still the Emperor, worm! And…”
Sakrine continued as if Kona was listening carefully.
“…to challenge you, and only you, in the ritual bloodbath.”
Silence.
After a moment, Kona responded.
“Why should I agree to this? You and your rebellion are going to be erased from this universe.”
“Because you know better than me that we’ve lost most of our fleet. Each ship is vital, now that the Thalans have joined the Coalition. I offer you the possibility to end our blood feud now. Who wins, takes the control of the Armada. I know that the bloodbath hasn’t been used for centuries, but this is the right occasion to renovate it.”
Kona could hear his subordinates speak quietly to each other behind him.
“I accept.”
“Good.”
“We’ll battle in the Arena of the Dark Palace, tomorrow, at dawn.”
“I won’t miss it.”
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“We’ve lost the 25th vanguard near Apoxis, sir”
“Idiots.” Sitting on her command chair in the assault cruiser Mercury, Amanda was coordinating what she hoped to be the last attack on the Drengin Empire. But there were always the few men that were involuntarily doing everything to make the attack fail. “I told them not to engage every ship that beeps on their radars… The Drengin aren’t weak. They are divided, and this is quite different… running ahead looking for preys brings only to defeat.”
“And now?”
“Move the 34th fighter squadron. Some Valkyrie fighters will be enough to buy some time to re-organize our fleet. Progress on the other fronts?”
“The Thalans have taken the Beta Aquarii system, and are moving toward the planet-fortress of Xandara. The Altarians have started an hell of an offensive. The AID has registered in-progress combats on twelve different planets and in seven star systems. The Drengin Gamma defence line has been broken in multiple points due to the Altarian operations. From the Spica system we don’t have new informations… We suppose that everything is going on in the right way. The Krynn and the Vardens are playing cat and mouse in their inner systems with the retreating Drengin fleets… We don’t have enough data to give an evaluation of the situation, but the First Directorate is working on it. The rebellions on Toria and Dratha are going well… the imperial troops presence has been limited to a few major urban centres. Total rebel victory is expected in five days, six at most.”
“Overall, it isn’t going bad. What’s going on near Drengia?”
“Well… that could be a problem. The two fleets have reunited… but they don’t seem to be preparing anything. They look like waiting for something…”
“Can we took them by surprise?”
“What do you have in mind, sir?”
“The Mercury-class cruisers are the fastest ships of our arsenal. Fifteen parsecs in a week. At that speed, we can arrive on Drengi, bomb the planet and then come back here.”
“It would be a major blow for their morale… but what about the Drengin fleet?”
“We’ll proceed in this way…” she started explaining her plan on the holo map.
“Risky… but it can work.”
“Let’s start?”
“Let’s start.”
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“Where are we going?” Dreghal asked the pilot of the battle transport Xasis.
“To the Yalia system. For what I’ve heard, there’s a rebellion going on. And the Coalition is attacking.”
“Bring me to Drengi. I have to be there!”
“That’s out of question, Sub-group Lord. Our cargo is too important to risk capt…”
As he said this, the Xasis was shook with a thunderous explosion.
“Great Drengi, what…”
“Kriath!”
“Battle stations!”
“Battle stations? We’re in a transport, not in a battleship! What do you think to do?”
“Fight for the Empire, Sub-group Lord! Charge the phasors!”
“That’s fooliness!”
Ignoring Deghal’s objections, the crewmen frenetically ran to their positions.
“Weapons ready, sir!”
“FIRE!”
Eight red stripes crossed the galactic void and hit the first of the Kriath ships. Its shields slowly crumbled, and the corvette exploded, pierced from the Xasis’ weapons. The other three ships moved behind the transport, and from here they started shooting to the engines.
“Divert more energy to the aft shields!”
“Auxiliary energy diverted. Charging the phasors for another run!”
“Take them down!”
The Xasis fired again. This time, the Kriath were ready. The ships dodged the hits, and replied, focusing all their firepower on the already targeted transport’s engine. Unable to sustain such damage, the deflectors gave up, and the Xasis was shook as its engine exploded.
Its bridge went in chaos. Screens exploded, chairs were thrown to the other side of the room, and dead Drengin fell to the floor, cluttering it.
“Report!”
“Engines are gone! Deflector grid is melted! Energy down to 55%! Hull breach in engineering!”
“They’re boarding us!”
Dreghal glanced an I-told-you look at the ship pilot, then gathered his troops, trying to organize a defence line to repel the capture attempt.
He decided to fight behind the door that connected the engineering to the main corridor. He looked his shock troops, giving the final adjustments to the battle plan. But before he could end that, the door took off toward him. He throw to the floor, and started firing in the new hole on the wall.
“Incoming!” someone shouted.
He saw five white globes hit the wall five meters in front of him. An invisible hand swiftly lifted and hurled him in the corridor. When he hit the titanium plate, he blackout.
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“Bloodbath?” Azamar asked.
“It’s an old Drengin tradition.” Eleys’ historian vein was reawakening. “A claimant challenges another Drengin in an hand-to-hand combat with their ritual weapons: shield, spear and dagger. The winner takes the loser’s charge, goods and privileges. It had been already used to decide who had to be the Emperor without unleashing a civil war. According to the legends, the last bloodbath took place on Drengi 6000 years ago, and lasted for twelve days and eleven nights.”
“With no interruptions? And what happens if someone takes advantage of the fight to attack the enemy Clans?”
“To ensure peace and stability, the two contenders nominate together a Caretaker. The Caretaker has the supreme power for the entire duration of the fight. He is generally an old and honoured Drengin, and he is assisted –and controlled- by six Arbiters, so that he can’t use his charge to take the power for a longer period of time.”
“So, now they will nominate a Caretaker…”
“Yes. He -or she- will have the task to defend Drengi until the new Emperor is proclaimed. Our informers say that he will probably be Hath’ar I’Aghol, that has replaced Xarlon as the leader of the Ghal Clan… you know, the ex-overlord. The latest addiction in Kona’s cut heads collection.”
“Only a Drengin can fight a civil war while he risks the complete defeat.”
“The Empire is still powerful, Archiater. Don’t underestimate it.”
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Sakrine entered in the Arena, armed with the ceremonial weapons that were shining under the red down. He and Kona stopped, facing each other in the middle of the round structure, and under the Caretaker’s severe watch, they shook their hands. Hath’ar I’Aghol wounded their arms with their daggers, collected part of their blood in a goblet, then he offered it to the two warriors, that drank in turn. He then left the remaining falling on the ground. Completed the ritual, the contenders moved to their positions, signed in the sand. The six Arbiters controlled that everything was right –weapons, protections, ritual symbols- before leaving the battle area and going to their emplacements, to supervise the soon-to-be lethal duel. The Caretaker said the last battle prayers, to ensure the victory of the worthier. Then he activated the ancient mechanism that turned the Arena in a completely different place. The fate decided to make them battle in a volcanic plain.
The Caretaker gave the signal, Kona and Sakrine charged, and the duel began.
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The Terran fleet emerged from the warp continuum, followed by smaller groups of Altarian and Shivan warships. Amanda looked the green and red planet that was on the visor. Drengi. The capital of the Drengin Empire. The homeworld of a race that has extinguished many others, and had been very near to annihilate the Alliance. All she had to do was to pulverize the defending fleet, and then bomb the planet to avenge seven years of fear and destruction. But… even with all the hate that she had for those green monkeys, she wasn’t disposed to kill billions of civilians only for vendetta. The only good Drengin is the dead one, yes, however… Well, let’s solve the main problem before doing something else. The defending fleet.
“Tactical analysis.”
“The enemy fleet is composed mainly by Dominator corvettes. I also see five long-range weapon platforms, five Aghrin cruisers, eight Kazan frigates, twenty-nine H’Rhath battle destroyers… and that thing hidden in a small asteroid cluster should be a carrier. Gharal class, I’d say from the shape, or maybe Za’than. We should expect fighters and bombers.”
“That’s not a problem. Our five Phalanx-class escorts are equipped with Harpoon missiles, able to lock a small target like a fighter.”
“And for the bigger warships?”
“Attack scheme Hell-26.”
Hell-26, aye aye. Engaging enemy targets now.”
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The fight was hard. Sakrine now had a new cut crossing his face, while Kona’s shield has been broken in half. The initial intention was to put up an honourable duel, but it had degenerated in a brutal fight with no exceptions of moves and incorrectness. A fight for survival. Both the contenders were agile and strong, and none of them was going to surrender. The crowd was silent. Usually, during a duel, the spectators were doing everything except for remaining silent. They cheered, booed, roared their approval or unhappiness for the hits. But now… the clangour of the swords could be heard clearly from everywhere in the Arena. Even the most thug warriors were now completely absorbed by the grim show in front of them.
Sakrine jumped a cleft with a small lava river in his bottom, landed on a big rock and stopped with his shield the sharp-edged stones that Kona threw against him. He took advantage of this to launch his spear, that hit Kona in his left shoulder. With a grunt, the former Emperor removed the weapon from him without a moan, and launched it back. Sakrine fell on the ground just in time to miss the spear, that embed in a rock behind him. He then ran towards Kona, the sword ready to hit. The two started a deathly dance, hitting the enemy and deviating hacks with the grace of a butterfly. Only that butterflies don’t kill each other.
They withdraw for a moment. But it was enough. Sakrine slipped over a blood spot and fell in the cleft. He could see the lava quickly nearing…
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“Ready for the first volley.”
“Ready.”
The two fleets were nearing. Amanda was frenetically giving the final adjustments to the battle plan. The first volley was always the most critical moment of the combat. A wrong opening manoeuvre , and dozens of ships could be vaporized in a matter of seconds.
“Not yet… not yet… not yet… NOW!
At her order, hundreds of quantum torpedoes started their course against the nearing Imperial fleet, returned by Drengin phasors and disruptors strips.
In both groups ships started to explode as torpedo passed the weak anti-missile defences and multiple laser hits overloaded shields, making them falling.
“Report!”
“Losses in the enemy fleet are quantified around 34%, 29% in our ranks, Great Admiral… Launching fighters now.”
Like in a prefixed ritual, both fleets launched their smaller crafts, that started battling in the no one’s territory between the two groups, while support ships tried to help them with long-range weapons.
And now…
“To all ships, start now attack phase 3.”
“Roger.”
The gargantuan army of warships broke the already known ritual, moving towards the enemy. The Drengin were first puzzled by the sudden Terran change in their usual battle plans. But when their ships began to be destroyed, they started counterattacking with a fervour that soon became desperation as the Coalition pushed them backwards, towards the planed that they should defend.
When the Drengin commander realized that his fleet was falling, he ordered to use every measure to keep the Alliance out of Drengi. Dominator corvettes, usually useless, began to ram in the warships.
When the battleship TAS Procyon exploded with a corvette inside the command bridge, Amanda realized that, after all, if the Drengin were ready to immolate themselves to protect their homeland, the battle would be much more bloody than she had expected. Even if the Drengin Emperor was battling on the surface to defend his rights. Or was exactly for that? Nevertheless, it was time for extreme measures.
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… and suddenly the lava river became a swamp. The Arena mechanism has activated again and has changed the environment, exactly as he has been projected to do, to complicate the fight. The lava plain left place to a marsh.
Sakrine landed with a loud splash in the dirty water. Ignoring the pain produced from the contact of the open wounds with the liquid, he looked for Kona. The Emperor was awkward in a small reed. The Overlord quietly approached his enemy, hidden and ready to attack. A single hit, and everything is finished.
He ran against his enemy, the sword ready to hit…
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Dreghal woke up, without opening his eyes. As he had been instructed to do at the Academy, he tried to explore the place where he was without drawing too much attention. He was rudely interrupted.
“We aren’t at the War Academy, Sub-group Lord. These tricks are out of place.”
A Korath was in front of the bed where he was. The place could had been a sickbay, but something told him that it wasn’t. Maybe the blood spots on the walls?
“Where I am?”
“This is not important. I make the questions, you answer. Clear?”
“Where I am?”
The Korath hit him, breaking his nose. Dreghal didn’t give a whimper.
“What are the data that your ship was carting about?”
“You can hit me all the day. I won’t answer your questions.”
Maybe he could have been more intimidating if his voice hadn’t been so nasal.
“If this is what you want…”
The Korath took a syringe with an colourless liquid in it. Before Dreghal could do anything, his jailer emptied it in his arm. A few seconds later, his mind started flying away from his body…
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When he woke up again, he could confusedly see the Korath confabulating with a Kriath, assumably the ship’s captain, according to his uniform. When they saw that he was awake, they stopped speaking.
“Where I am?” he asked defiantly again.
“Aboard the K.S.V. Sphyran, Sub-group Lord. I am Ship Lord Khare.”
“K.S.V.? Since when the Kriath have a separate fleet?”
“From now. The Empire has fallen. We gained independence.”
“No… this can’t be…”
“Yes… it can.”
He turned on a small screen, and images of a military news report appeared, showing the death of Lord Kona and the Caretaker that was crowning Sakrine I’Aghol as his successor.
“As you can see, the Empire is gone, and now people that have betrayed the loyalty bounds are now commanding. You have to help us… the data about the Terror Star project. How can we read them? If we don’t, the traitors will do so… we don’t have too much time.”
Dreghal couldn’t tell why, but he was sure that that was the truth. He started speaking, while the Ship Lord took notes.
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“It worked.”
Khare and the Korath were outside the sickbay door. Dreghal had been drugged again.
“Yes. I told you that with that special compound, you can made the prisoners think anything. Kona dead, c’mon! Now, my reward…”
“Yes… here it is.”
A laser shot, and the Korath was dead.
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“The data are incoming.”
Eleyes looked the screen, where lines and lines of the strange Drengin letters were slowly appearing.
“So, this is the lethal Terror Star project.” Azamar commented “It’s fantastic… In comparison, a Black Hole Eruptor is a toy.”
“They still haven’t found a solution for the requested energy output problem.” Eleys objected.
“Yes, but I have compared my suppositions with the Shivan Keeper of the Knowledge, and he has half an idea about the synchronization of the black matter’s fluctuation in the ionized corridor when the alpha waves hit the quantum…”
“Less technobabble, more facts.” she ordered.
“…a way to solve the problem.”
“Excellent. Transmit the data to our allies… as always.”
“Yes, sir.”
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What went wrong? Sakrine couldn’t tell. The fact was that a moment before he was ready to kill his enemy, and the following moment was laying on the ground, with Kona’s sword in his chest. The pain was unimaginable, and it wasn’t only physical. The consciousness that he had failed was overwhelming. He has failed to give freedom to his race… he has condemned them to defeat. It was something he couldn’t allow.
Kona was turned towards the Caretaker, that now was slowly going down the stairs to check his victory. So he didn’t notice Sakrine until he grabbed him and pushed his face in the water. It’s incredible how much strength can have a dying body. Kona slowly drown, despite all his efforts to free himself from the deathly embrace. The two contenders died together. When Sakrine looked the crowd before exhaling his last breath, he found the answer that he had been looking for so long. Yes. I have done the right thing.
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The Arbiter looked shocked along with ninety thousand Drengin the scene that he had in front of him. Never, as far as a Drengin can remember, both the opponents had died in a bloodbath. He looked for the Arbiters, to have an advice. The seven warriors gathered in the Throne room to find a solution.
“This situation is… so incredible! I can’t believe that…”
“Thanks, Heterya, but I think that we all agree on the uniqueness of this situation. What I would like to hear is a solution…” Hath’ar angrily said.
“Well, I think that you should take the government. Only momentarily, of course, until the I’Aghols have elected another Emperor.”
“Yes, I think that this is the best option we have.”
”I agree.”
“Either I.”
Hath’ar looked carefully each one of the Arbiters. Take the command of the Empire… and in such a dangerous period… try to make decisions for the good of all the Drengin, decisions that maybe they won’t accept… but he has been chosen for this.
“Agreed. Let’s inform the people.”
As he stood up, a soldier ran in the room.
“Caretaker… we’ve a problem in orbit. The Terrans…”
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“Don’t be silly, Drengin. You are close to defeat. Resistance is futile.”
The Borg phrase fit perfectly with this situation, Amanda thought.
“Maybe it is, but as far as I’m alive, you won’t put your inferior foot on our homeworld!”
“Drengin, I have three heavy cruisers that have broke your blockade and are ready to bomb the planet. Are you sure that…”
“Thank you, Sarhan. Now I take the command.” A third voice interrupted the discussion.
“Affirmative, Caretaker.”
“Who are you?”
“I am Hath’ar I’Aghol, leader of the Ghal Clan and Caretaker of the Empire.”
“Good. As I was saying to your… admiral before, I offer you to surrender without excessive unfavourable conditions.”
“I won’t surrender. My race won’t surrender! We still have more fleets than you have. We will…”
“I have ships equipped with nuclear weapons ready to bomb the planet! Are you sure that you want to condemn sixteen billion innocents? I don’t ask too much. The Coalition doesn’t ask too much. We want only peace. You have the power, and the freedom, to make this decision. I know that a Caretaker has the same powers of an Emperor during a bloodbath, and that his decisions can’t be annulled too easily. You can be remembered as the warrior that put an end to this awful conflict, the warrior that prevented a massacre, the warrior that saved his race. I ask only this to you.”
Hath’ar looked the human. Suddenly all his warrior aggressiveness disappeared. Her eyes were so deeply asking the… but he had to…
“Please.”
He bent his head.
“Kona is dead, and so Sakrine. I am in power, for now. And I think… I think that you are right. This war has lasted too much. Too much blood has been poured. I propose to sign a ceasefire with immediate effect. We’ll discuss later the conditions for a peace treaty.”
“Thank you. Oh, thanks!”
The Caretaker looked again the human on the screen. Her eyes were slowly filling with tears, he noticed before the channel was cut.
Peace.
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The declaration caught everyone off of guard.

On Altaria, Eleys and Azamar looked shocked the screen as a special report of the GNN informed the galaxy of what was going on.
“… we still don’t know what pushed the Empire to do such a radical move… Their forces are retreating from all the non-Imperial territories to the old ante bellum borders… Sources from the Terran Ministry of Defence say that Emperor Kona is dead, but this still has to be confirmed. A spokesman of the Geneva Capitol has informed few minutes ago that President Bradley will do a not programmed Speech to the Alliance tomorrow at 9:00. Now I leave the line to our special correspondent from Arcea… What do the Arceans say about this, Jeff?”
Eleys looked the Archiater with the same expression if she had just been run over by an HGV. “Peace…”
“It seems so, sir.”
Then Eleys recovered from the shock. She literally jumped on Azamar, embracing and kissing him.
“Please… Milady… conduct!”
“It… It’s over… It’s over!”
Azamar managed to fudge from her hold.
“Everything we have done in seven years… It worked… we are free.”
She looked far different now. In her eyes there was the ancient hope, the ancient determination. Seven years of pain and sacrifices were now ended. Now, the Altarians can rise their heads again towards the stars, looking for their destiny. A better one.

On Earth, Alan Bradley was being submerged from data reports. An army of secretaries, generals, admirals and senators were going backwards and forwards from his office in the AC4. No one had a clear idea of what was going on. There were the optimistic, the pessimistic and the undecided, and all of them were convinced that their opinion was the right one. In the past few hours, Alan tried to make order in the immense Allied chain command, deleting planned incursions and assuring that no stupid officers were going to blow up the armistice, stopping only to drink some cups of coffee.
“An so? Have you…”
Please, Mr President. It would be much better if you don’t interrupt us every three minutes to know if we have established the connection.”
“I have to talk with Great Admiral Alighieri! The hell has broken out, and we still don’t know exactly what’s happening! I need…”
“Maybe here we are” a technician interrupted him.
Amanda’s figure materialized on the holo projector.
“Admiral…”
“Mr. President.”
“I want an immediate report.”
“Yes, sir. The Empire has acknowledged to an armistice. Their ships are retreating…”
She spent a good twenty minutes talking without interruptions.
“How did you do it?”
“Well… improvisation, commander.”
“You have disobeyed to your orders.” Alan said severely.
Amanda looked him as if he was crazy. “But…”
“I’m joking, Admiral. Joking.”
“Mh-mh. It’s not funny, sir.”
“Now, secure the perimeter. Once you’ve done this, you have to receive other three or four medals… together with a promotion.”
“I’d refuse that…”
“Don’t be silly. You’ve practically ended this war on your own. You can’t accept only an Order of the Alliance. This one is your sixth, right?”
“Seventh. But sir, I think that this would be an insult to all our soldiers. I haven’t won the war alone. It’s -mostly- thanks to them. And however, the war isn’t finished. We still have…”
“…bureaucratic formalities to do. Amanda, that’s not a problem, considering that the only thing that has remained intact on Earth in these seven years is our diplomatic service. I expect the beginning of the negotiations in less than a week.”
“It would be fantastic. Peace…”
“Yes, Amanda. Peace.”

Aboard the Hammerhead, things were a little more complex. They were fighting a small Drengin fleet near Grathis with a Shivan battlegroup when the armistice was declared. Unfortunately, the Drengin commander didn’t seemed so happy to end the war with a disengagement and a retreat. So, for them the Imperial forces were still the Enemy.
“Turn! 180 degrees! Complete rotation! Ready to invert engine power!”
“Watch out that corvette!”
“Plasma incoming!”
“Qin, maybe it’s better if…”
CAN I DO MY JOB?
The four silenced.
“Thanks. I’m enough…“ He threw the incursor in a perfect loop “…under pressure.”
“When this will be finished, pilot, we are going to revise the manual, chapter 3.”
“Ranks and promotions?”
“Exactly. However… WATCH OUT!
The Hammerhead passed miraculously intact between two colliding ships.
“… I’d like to be alive to do this.”
“I’m doing the best I can, sir!”
“I know, but…” this time the Hammerhead avoided a Photon torpedo “… sometimes I wonder if you want to kill us all.”
“He’s dodging most of the hits, sir!” Renee intervened.
“Yes, but another loop like the last one, and I’ll be ready for the anticipated retirement…”
Dave blew.
“Like if someone can force you to leave this banger…”
“Exactly. You’d never leave us.” Dimitri said.
“Don’t bee too sure, lieutenant. Now that there is – should be…” he corrected, as a disruptor shot hit the small ship and threw it away, while Qin furiously fought to retake control of the Hammerhead. “…peace, I think that no one can stop me from using that three months of unused licence that I have. Maybe in an exotic location like Toria – I’ve heard that the Torians make miracles with their thermal baths.”
“I doubt that you’ll be satisfied with a calm pension… BAD-MANNERED!” Renee shouted to a Dominator corvette that rudely interrupted their discussion when it started firing at the Hammerhead. The ship was destroyed a few seconds later by a Shivan Dragon fighter.
“I was saying… yes, I doubt that you’ll be satisfied with a simple pension.”
“Maybe you’re right… I’ll simply wait for another call. The galaxy isn’t a calm place. There will always be another war to fight. But we’re talking only about me. What about you?”
“I think I’ll come back to Earth and go back to my studies in Oxford. I was graduating in Xeno Engineering.” Qin said. “And Dimitri, if I’m not wrong, was a technician for Rainbow Designs.”
“Yes. I was. Maybe I’ll resume my old job… But I still have to decide.”
“And you, Dave? What will you do?”
“Well… I was planning to remain in the military. I’d like to be part of the crew of a bigger warship… maybe the Galatea.”
“Great Admiral Alighieri personal flagship? You’re ambitious.”
Dave blushed.
“I know. But… I’ve always wanted to be on a major warship, not only an incursor.”
“Understandable.”
“But why is she using a Mercury class cruiser now?”
“Because of its speed. But I think that once her small operation is completed, she will use again the Galatea.”
“And you, Renee?”
“I’d like to reopen my old commercial activity… I used to work in a small fashion boutique on Poseidon. Maybe it’s still there.”
“Why have you left it?”
“The Drengin were arriving… I volunteered to keep them away from the planet. I know, it’s strange to pass from a fashion boutique to a radar screen, but I wanted to do something…” She checked the display “That seems to be the flagship, sir. Lots of communications in and out.”
“Qin, Dimitri, ready for a volley.”
“Roger.”
“Aye.”
The Hammerhead passed the burning wreck of a Shivan frigate, and started firing with its venerably singularity driver. The results were quickly seen: the bridge of the ship exploded, while the Terran incursor agilely dodged the laser shots of the rapid-fire anti-fighter turrets.
“The Drengin seem confused. They aren’t receiving orders anymore.”
“Good. This will make things easier.”
It made. The Shivans quickly surrounded the Drengin formations, and destroyed them one by one.
“Final score: Coalition 1, Drengin Empire 0, and for today it’s all, folks!” Dmitri announced.
“Qin, set a course for Varna Station. I think that we can say the war is finally over.”
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Aboard the Behemoth, now safely docked with Melpomenes Station near Mars, the new was welcomed with a general ovation. Everyone around Sira, the crew seemed to have suddenly gone mad. Someone was kissing, someone was singing, someone was simply crying. The Altarian shook amused her head. The humans could became completely crazy, she noted smiling. When she saw Winston and Thorin happily dancing, the human on a table to compensate his shortness compared to the Drath, she couldn’t hold any longer her laugh. In response, the two brought her in their crazy can-can. Then someone appeared with cakes and drinks, and a party was rapidly organized on the command bridge.
When Sira managed to escape from the collective madness, she went in her room. She saw that on the computer there was a message from the Ministry of Defence. I can read it later, she thought. Peace. I can’t believe it. Everything that we have done in years… It’s all finished. But there was something… strange. She still felt a little… worried? The sensation of an imminent danger?
She shook her head. It’s only tiredness. And the consciousness that there had been so many deaths… I’d like to have done something more…Even if I have avenged my family, I could have done more.
She laid on her bed. After a few minutes, she was sleeping deeply, knowing that tomorrow the galaxy would have been a much better place. And that was also thanks to her.
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And so, this is the end. From his admiral ship, Hath’ar was now looking the Terran homeworld. She was amazed from the sight of blue oceans that had hardly any match from other planets in the universe. In a few hours he and the leaders of the Coalition would have signed an official peace treaty. The ad interim Emperor knew that he would have needed all his ability to fight with the human diplomats. He was determined to assure to the Empire honourable terms, but that would have been hard. But after all, the Drengin military was still the most powerful. Not that a fleet could do something against a nuclear missile. The Terrans have used all that museum pieces to incinerate the Drengin top fleets. He sighed.
Dharna I’Aghol informed him that it was time. He sighed again, then he moved to fight the hardest battle.
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The official peace treaty was signed three weeks later, after a long struggle in the Terran city of Orleans. After all, Hath’ar managed to effectively conclude honourably the conflict. The Drengin had to give all the conquered worlds to their old owners, among with some border planets, ships and an economical compensation, mainly given to the Varden Council, and to recognize the political autonomy of the Kriath Clan. But they conserved their rights over the original core of the Empire.
After a series of signings, hand shakings, speeches and various diplomatic formalities, the delegations concluded their work, and left the planet. Two weeks of national holidays were declared on Earth, and slowly everything returned to the before-war routine.
Alan could only smile as the newspapers started declaring all the good things that he had done during the conflict, and how he has managed to brilliantly conclude the fights, while only a month before they were saying that it was all his fault.
“In a few years, it will be everything like before.” Amanda said from her chair in the Presidential Office, in Geneva, while Bradley was looking the fireworks that were shining on the lake. The night was peaceful, and the Terrans were still celebrating.
“Yes. But first we have a last problem to solve.”
“What’s up?”
“Your promotion, Great Admiral. Or should I say now Grand Fleet Admiral?”
Oh, no, she thought.
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A last effort. Then I'll can buy that nice house near lake Michigan. Aaron entered in the dark Imperial Room for what he hoped to be the last time. The usual bow, the usual diplomatic formalities, then he started the formal speech. But Avatar didn’t look happier for the end of the war. Not at all. Despite this made him suspicious, Aaron continued.
“My purpose for my visit, Avatar, is to establish some solid bases for further relations with your Empire and to open formal relations with the others… political entities. Now that the peace is finally…”
“Peace?”
Avatar opened silently his claws, in the Shivan way of laughing.
“No, Terran. There won’t be peace. Not yet.”
Aaron froze in fear.
“Are you threatening…”
“It’s not me, human. It’s them.”
“Them?”
“Yes, ambassador. They… are coming.”



The end… and the beginning.
Reply #54 Top
OoO!!! Brilliant, well done good sir! A brilliant story with a stunning conclusion, and I hope to see what the Coalition is pitted up against next..
Reply #56 Top
Well, if I said that, I’d ruin my weak attempt to create something like a J.J. Abrams’-Alias effect… :D
Reply #57 Top
Bravo Bravo very very good...some parts made shivers race up and down my spine! Keep up the excellent Dialog
Reply #58 Top
will you write annother one?
Please do!!!
Reply #59 Top
I’m writing the sequel, “Odyssey into Hell”… I should be able to post the first chapter for the end of the month, when school is finished. And thanks for the positive comments, everyone!