i still suggest you move the trees off the edges of the picture and not hve them so dominate....
yr focal point is the bird.
it was my pleasure to do that piccy for you, i also did it to show you the techy side of art, the two trees (in my pic) act as a frame so your eyes dont wander to far, the mountain is basically an aid for the eyes to look upwards and connect with the bird....
does that make sense?... and the rest of the scenery in my version is not too dominating and also has space, but also prospective...
hope this makes sense.....
xxxxx