I'm gladly going to work with Pacov to polish the campaign. I'm making notes as I go. Please note that I love Elemental, and overall have been impressed with the campaign. I expect Pacov and I (and whoever else goes through it) to post everything, then go back and highlight what we see important.
Philosophy One thing I noted is that Elemental will be getting a tutorial. How experienced with the game should someone be going through the campaign? All of my notes are based on the campaign being the very first thing people touch, with no previous experience with any similar games. When I say "I had problems figuring this out" does not mean that I personally had trouble, only that my fictitious newbie persona had trouble.
I will try to post potential solutions to the issues I raise.
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Chapter 1
Dialogue The first thing I think about, as I watch the opening video, is why is Kraxis evil? Or rather, why are the fallen empires evil? Perhaps one of the first few characters we meet should talk about how they did dark things back in the day.
Dialogue When talking with Janusk for the first time, I say, "Excellent. You will make a fine addition to our Kingdom." Wouldn't something like "I'd be glad for the company" be more fitting? I'm just shipwrecked - I don't have a kingdom yet.
Gameplay Advice Needed After joining together, I click and go nowhere. Somewhere prior, it would be good to know that there is an "end turn" button.
Dialogue I'm running to inform the queen (my queen?) of the treachery, and in the midst found a Kingdom. Thats nice and all, but isn't that a little..counter productive to delivering a message? Aren't I in someone else's territory?
Gameplay Advice Needed I found that Janusk has a shop. I'm not really sure what to buy. I see that I could buy staffs instead of clubs - which is better? The staff has a higher damage with a .25 attack speed. The club has 2 damage and...no attack speed listed. On a more metagame note - Do the items carry over? Will the gold? Is there any reason to sit and stockpile pork for fifty turns before I run out? I also had a hard time figuring out where/how to equip weapons. [This might be easier with future UI updates]. As I approach the bandits, it tells me I can click the view equipment button. Might be nice for that to pop up earlier, in case I went to the spider first.
Gameplay Advice I enter the tactical battle with the Bandits, and I leave it, without any popups. Would be nice for something to say "victory!" especially after my first battle, and to mention that I gained spoils, which can be used to equip further, as well as experience.
Bug As I keep moving back to dispatch the spiders after killing the bandits, it keeps auto-moving me back torward the bandit camp. Not sure why, and very frustrating. With enough button clicking, I'm able to over-ride the automove, and after about ten turns I'm able to get back to the spider camp.
Leveling Up Advice? I see that I can put points in my Lord as I see fit. Which is nice. But some advice would be well placed. I also note that dexterity says it "increases defense", while combat speed is "my dexterity in battle." Better tooltips needed.
Auto-Resolve After fighting the bandits, I went back and bought equipment, then went to the spider's lounge. I won, but he killed all of my peasants. That wasn't very nice of him.